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My love i feel so far away
from thee
hear my words
"Come save me...."
I feel trapped in a
prison so far
from you
you were my hope
but your not coming
through
So leave me to die
I'll find a way
to rescue myself
from harms way!
- by SerenityRivers |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/07/2009 |
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- Title: Cinderella no more
- Artist: SerenityRivers
- Description: I wrote this thinking of a guy friend of mine who didn't want anything to do with me i wrote this only on emotion plz let me know if you like it or hate it ! Thanks btw plz dont steal!
- Date: 07/07/2009
- Tags: love heart thoughts
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Comments (4 Comments)
- the_ashen_child - 08/17/2009
- it's not bad, you could work a bit more on word choice and flow but other than that ^^ (thankz for the comment btw XD)
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- Chomp Chomp Dead - 07/08/2009
- for ur first time writting a poem, it was really good. 10/5
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- i-Comatose-i - 07/08/2009
- Cool 5/5
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- SerenityRivers - 07/07/2009
- This is my 1st poem that i wrote
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