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Lost in my mind, I see no way out.
The darknees all around me, closeing in.
It will not destroy me, for I have friends to help me.
The light shines I am free.
For now...
- by Exeno chan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: In my mind waing for a friend.
- Artist: Exeno chan
- Description: This is just a short poem about, how lonely I feal.
- Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: traped mind
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXLeiko_TsukikoXx - 11/30/2009
- haha notice all the girls love it and the dudes dis it haha
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- xXLeiko_TsukikoXx - 11/30/2009
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haha just like my 7th grade year but my friend shyanne helped me=D
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- TranquilAwakening - 11/15/2009
- short and sweet
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- elenalovesyou2 - 10/15/2009
- Quite lovely. The beginning is amazing, it drew me in. Though I do think it can be improved with more descriptions and depth. But over all, quite lovely. smile
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- white lion1010 - 09/15/2009
- this fucign sucs -.- if u wanna make a poem alest make it ryme i mean coem on its not that herd dude
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- SleepyAeon - 09/10/2009
- Wonderful
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- Yan Qi - 08/29/2009
- It has feeling. Therefore, it is true. Therefore, it is poetry. Therefore, it is good.
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