The Emo Poem

• Artist: ur_emo_babe97
• Description: It is about a emo gurl or boy dat is half dead and half not its dedicated to the emo ppls dat i love i rox my world!
• Date: 07/10/2009
• Tags: readit

The Emo Poem

Go to sleep and close ur eyes
and dream of broken butterflies
dat tore there wings against a thorn
u kno the pain dat they have borned

Silver metal shines so bright
and scarlet blood dat feels so rite
and dream of dat blood trickling down
and wake up just before u drown

The moonlight reflects ur tears
as u cry out ur own worst fears
so tonight wen u start to cry
whispers the cutters lullaby:

Hushabye baby ur almost dead
u dont have a pulse and ur pillow is red
ur family hates u ur friends let u bleed
so sleep tight with a knife cuz its all dat u need

Rockabye baby broken scarred
u didnt kno life wood be dis hard
time to end the pain dat u have hid so well
and down will come baby straight back to hell

Comments

[meet ur angel]

I can still read it, and as i am emo, i find it to my liking. The style is pleasing to me, despite what others may say, i personally like it.

[ApolloXHades]

I like your poem but try not to write in text form. You have good word choice but it looks more professionally done.
Just like Deadstar x Assembly said-it would look alot better!

[Deadstar x Assembly]

3/5.
Write with proper grammar and spell out words. Using correctly spelled words make a poem much more pleasing to the eye.