Why??

• Artist: -xXxShatteredxXxMindxXx-
• Description: eh..i d0n't kn0w h0w qh00d it turned 0ut..buh if yhu rate..please c0mment as well..:] i w0uld like any type 0f c0nstructive criticism..[&&]if yhu d0n't have c0nstructive criticism..dhen jus leave whatever..if yhu hated it 0r liked it..jus lemme kn0w..:] thanks..:]
• Date: 07/15/2009
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i want to know..
all you are..
all you want to be..
and all you were..
i want to know..
all you hate..

i want to know..
why when you qo..
i can't breathe..
and when you're here..
i lose my speach..
i want to know why i tremble..
when by my side you are assembled..

i want to know..
why we can never be..
i want to know..
because you make mhe believe..
i want to know..
why suddenly there's hope..
and when you leave..
it becomes a ghost..

i want to know..
why just seeinq you smile..
makes enduring this pain worthwhile..
i want to know..
why..
i've left everyone else..
forqotten those..
but why..
with you..
why can't i just let you g0??

Comments

[Rinkuro Tachibana]

thats very good! & the ppl below are right

[-xXxShatteredxXxMindxXx-]

yeah..in l0ve..i've always been dhe l0ser..

[juggalo028]

you will get over it. dont worry. when you get older love is just a game. you better hope your the winner. it hurts getting struck out.

[xC H O C O_T A C Ox]

i remember when i used to right love poems, back when i was in love... i liked it though keep it up.