I am Music And Dance

• Artist: JessicaRayDiantAngel
• Description: My class was working on "I am" poems and I got the highest grade for this one. My teacher let me read it in front of the class and they applauded after I was done. I felt embarrassed but happy. Like I got the message I was trying to convey across. The poem is about the need to hear the music that is all around us. Sorry if it's a little sappy. I’m a drama child and Art's kids tend to be dramatic.:sweat: Anyway, comment please? And look at my profile; it also conveys the message of the poem.
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: poem dance music dream sight

I am Music and Dance
I wonder the song that falls to my ears
I hear the sweet rhythm
I see the tears
I want the lyrics that cause joy and delight
I am Music and Dance

I pretend I know all
I feel I do not
I touch the waterfall
I worry about sight
I cry that people go through life without hearing
I am Music and Dance

I understand that sight is interesting
I say it is not all there is
I dream one day we will hear the music
I try that my music reaches the ears of his
I hope for song to come to everyone
I am Music and Dance

Comments

[XDG Reaper]

Love it, can I use some of this in a song? PM me? ^_^ I won't unless you give me permission.

[Erin805]

its 2 sappy i hate it!! lol jk i love you jessica and your peoms are amazing!

[Vampire_crossbreed]

i like it! it doesn't seem sappy at all, its very good!

[maydaymouse]

It's not sappy, it's very good and true. And I believe you got your message across clearly. 55/^^