Just A Lie

• Artist: xX_undead cookie_Xx
• Description: this is just something i put together i wanted to get feedback before i enter it in the contest im going to enter it in just give me some feedbcak and remember this is a very very rough draft :)
  and dont be a hater
• Date: 08/23/2009
• Tags: just

Im so tired of being here,
Wrapped up in all of my frightning fears.

Waiting for my hero to come,
And save me from all I have done.

Hope shines in the light of his eyes,
To bad all of that's just a lie.

Why can't my dream come true?
Why am I still waiting for you.

All these tears drip from my eyes,
Because all you are is just a lie.

Comments

[drifters_destiny]

Pretty good! Maybe tweak a few words here and there, but I like it