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within my life i found nothing but a new existence
within my life i have looked for it
i have found it after so long
in my life i thought that i would die with out seeing even glimpse of it
i looked in the mountain
where the troll ate his victims
i looked through the forests where the elves still existed
i looked with the caves where the cyclopes sat waiting for something
i found nothing in that
for i am darkness
i am nothing that you may know
i hide in the day
and look in the night
for i am existence
i live as long as the elves
i am smarter then they are though
when i fly i can fly
when i run i can run
i will always be here hunting
for my new existence in blood.
- by SGT_Karocue_Raver |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/09/2009 |
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- Title: existence in a vampire
- Artist: SGT_Karocue_Raver
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Description:
my thoughts
- Date: 09/09/2009
- Tags: existence vampire
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ultrauiolet - 10/21/2009
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sorry raver, star is right.
i have no idea how your 'poem' ended up as one of the best. - Report As Spam
- SGT_Karocue_Raver - 09/29/2009
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#1 no need for rhymes not all poetry has ryhymes
#2 not all poetry needs sylible streaming just need heart
#3 thank for your imput and double posting is really bad - Report As Spam
- 290DarkStars - 09/10/2009
- oh yeah... and what does a vampire have to do with darkness? They are two seperate things (even though Vampires are only supposed to live at night)
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- 290DarkStars - 09/10/2009
- you sureley know nothing about the horrors of darkness. There is no steady meter, no sylible stream, and no rhymes.... this does NOT belong in poetry.
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