I am Sorry

• Artist: Doctor the Sixth
• Description: For the best person in the world
• Date: 09/10/2009
• Tags: sorry

I am sorry for the pain I caused
I am sorry for it all
I never would have said what I said
If I only knew
If I only knew what you went through
If I only knew what would happen
I am sorry that my words hurt you
I am truly and ultimately sorry
Will you forgive and forget?
Or will I never hear the end of it?
I will call in a little while to talk this out,
I love you and I am sorry.

Comments

[DDrox316]

2 things: ... actually, make that 3
1: I like it (:
2: I don't know if you prefer "I am" , but most people use "I'm" (like in everyday speech) and I think using "I'm" might make the poem flow better
3: the 3rd to last line says "never hea the end" ... could you change it to hear? thanks...
one more thing-this poem reminds me of another one i just read... http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?action=add&entry_id=101703719&n=949332313.1259737306.169458322&rating=5#title