Went Out

• Artist: Smol Pixel IV
• Description: Another of tania & Jared Productions.
  Started out with a reall thing that happen to Jared
  then we turned it into
  a
  beautifull peiace of poetry.
• Date: 09/21/2009
• Tags: went love happy sadd real

Went Out


I wake up to the telephone right at three o'clock I didn't know what was going on

you woke up we woke up we got dressed we went out to the party back in Arizona we got time we got style we got things we need to do before the party starts

you called me that night when I gave you my number and we ~~~~~~ woke up we got up we got dressed we went out to the mall but the mall was closed so we hung out by the mall

we talked about the things we use to do three years ago

we found out that we were weird

but yet

we woke up we got up we got dressed we went out to your home town to see your friends at the towns old skate park over by the back alley were we use to hang out at after school

so we woke up we got up we went out and drove down past your old house and relived our lives when we were younger and we laughed at the stupid things we use to say

so I woke up I got up I got dressed I went out to your house to see you again so we can go out and do the things we use to do three years ago

Comments

[NakedJack]

There is no punctuation. Its really boring, uninspired, repetitive, run on sentences, poorly written ones, I will add, and it *seems* to be a random string of thoughts; Like no work was put into this at all. I can tell little effort went into this. And that is why no on respects writing as much as painting; They think its so easy to slap down some lines.