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I wish I had one more chance,
I wish I had one more day.
I wish I had the words for you,
Just so you would stay.
The things I would tell you,
The things I would say...
The pictures I'd draw for you
Would hopefully make it okay.
If I could show you...
A glimpse into my soul,
You'd see how broken it was
And just how much you made it whole.
I waited fourteen years,
I waited for you.
Now it's slipped between my fingers.
It's all done within two.
However did I go wrong?
Was there something amiss?
Something that I never saw,
Despite the lack of any kind of bliss.
I wish I could hear you laugh again,
Knowning that you'd smile.
I'll accept the fact I'll never hear it,
Not even for a little while.
I'll never hear you say my name again,
Not even with typing.
I'll never hear about you again,
Not even with writing.
Part of me is gone,
Resting in space of nothingness,
Part of me is still alive,
So tired and yet restless.
- by Starkiplier |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/09/2009 |
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- Title: Broken
- Artist: Starkiplier
- Description: My best friend left me today.
- Date: 10/09/2009
- Tags: broken friendship hurt pain sadness
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Comments (3 Comments)
- h00drat64 - 10/13/2009
- The rhyming was mediocre, so was the description/figurative language/and perspective on this kind of experience. It wasn't horrid though, so 2/5.
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- dark_shadows_eyes - 10/12/2009
- really awesome poeme your really good i feel bad for you i had to change school four times and had to say bye to all my friends so i know deel really bad for you but you will see that theres something good coming for you
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- 2014_North_Star - 10/09/2009
- I'm sorry about your situation. sad The poem reminded me of my best friend leaving me in 4th grade, but then she apologized and came back. You have great rhyming skills. smile
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