Sing a Song

• Artist: Enshara
• Description: A poem that was published when I entered it in a contest in High School.
• Date: 10/13/2009
• Tags: sing song original poem

Sing a song unto the world,
of a time of peace and joy.
Sing a song of the world,
Tell the tales of heroes past.
Tell of the brave of heart.
Sing
Oh, sing of the world.
Sing of days long gone.
Listen to the winds of time,
As they sing through the dawn.
Sing a song,
Oh sing a song as the light fades away.
May your light never fade,
As the wind sings its song.
So, sing a song unto the world
of a time of peace and joy

Comments

[Danna Amamus]

It's great to have a success! I would use this piece to challenge yourself though. Try to see if you can develop a rhyme-scheme with it, or change the words or punctuation somehow to give it a different sound entirely. Because you're so familiar with it, it's a great place to experiment. ^__^ Lines 12+13 sounded a little repetitive on the tongue to me when I read it through, but the rest was good. Great job!

[Hell_Cat88]

It's very good. It resembles the songs I remember hearing in church so many years ago.

[xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx]

Very Epic