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How can i please you? everything i do leads to yells, screams and slammed doors. you see that i cant do this, but you still push me to do it anyway. Why are you keeping me here? to torture me? to shuve in my face that I'm imperfect? What do you plan to do with me? you keep me so close but for what? Now that I'm gone you want me back, you have tortured me once, i will not let you do it again.....I have left, i will rot, i will die, without you by my side, on my own.
- Title: I will leave
- Artist: Dwitzy
- Description: this is a moment in my like were i really didn't like.
- Date: 11/24/2009
- Tags: will leave
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- Ahseyo - 07/30/2010
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very, very nice. Almost like something I'd write. Could be a little longer, a bit more "experimented" with, but awesome. 5/5
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- HappyTripGirl - 11/29/2009
- (: love it
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- metalfist13 - 11/25/2009
- awwwwwwwwwww very sad 4/5 please rate back http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101857589#title
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