All alone

• Artist: Xx_Zack_Aerith_Lover_xX
• Description: I was thinking about how I've been feeling lately about people listening...mostly my family. Then this poem popped in my head. Please tell me what you think.
  
• Date: 12/12/2009
• Tags: death alone family heaven family

I'm all alone.
No one can hear me, no one listens.
No one see's me, see's how I feel.
No one knows what I'm thinking, no one knows how I feel.
No one cares, I'm left all alone feeling empty and alone.
No one wants me.
I feel left in the dark, left to survive on my own.
I try to tell them but they don't listen.
I make a choice no one will know because they chose not to listen.
I run away to heaven to be happy, to where I won't be alone ever again.
No one knows, because they never cared enough to listen.

Comments

[Xx_Zack_Aerith_Lover_xX]

Thanks. I hope everything works out for you as well. wink It's nice to know that I'm not the only one out there who has feelings like this.^.^

[The Cat Rider]

I really like this poem. I can relate to your feelings completely, it's as if you were speaking for me. Very nicely done, and good luck with whatever is bothering you 5/5 please rate back smile

[Xx_Zack_Aerith_Lover_xX]

Thank you.^.^ Yeah...Lately I've been dealing with a lot of stuff and I've recently noticed or felt how my family doesn't listen to me...Yeah....So I came up with this poem. wink

[Cosmic_Annihilation]

I think it is well written. I've had to deal with the same feelings. A lack of acknowledgment brings a feeling of isolation so deep that it is hard to pull out of sometimes.