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The first winter snow falls so pure
Absolving me of all my petty fears,
Bringing me back to a better time,
A time when you were still mine.
I remember the first time we kissed,
We were so nervous that we almost missed.
The time i bought you that ring
And told you you weren't just some one-night fling.
I remember your eyes,
How they'd brighten when you smiled and tear up when you cried.
I remember that night
When everything just felt so right.
I remember your last call
When you told me you were just going to go to the mall.
I'd been waiting to ask you to be my wife,
I would have done it sooner if i knew you were going to be torn out of my life...
- by AzN_ShadowBlade |
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- | Submitted on 12/16/2009 |
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- Title: I Remember
- Artist: AzN_ShadowBlade
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Description:
Yet another depressing love poem, you will find that these are my personal specialty..
anyways, this was inspired by a lot of things..my last relationships rather brutal ending, Snow Falling On Cedars by David Guterson, and a line in there from nickelback ;D - Date: 12/16/2009
- Tags: love remember memory tradgedy poem
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Rath Roiben Ryee - 08/26/2010
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Great poem ;__; Almost made me cry, considering how emotional I've been getting D;
I give it a 4.5/5 :3
I do love the rhyming you put in it~ ^-^ - Report As Spam