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We kissed and part
Now our worlds are dead
I doubt something new will start
Later that night my arm bled
Next time we met, I stared at you
Your face had a pleasant smile
In your eyes it feels as if I knew
That there was someone that I thoght was vile
I asked who is it?
You said his name and my heart fell to the bottomless sea
- by The Tainted Blac Rose |
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- | Submitted on 01/11/2010 |
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- Title: The Last Kiss
- Artist: The Tainted Blac Rose
- Description: A broken heart after a last and final kiss that wasn't enough..From my point of view, I feel this poem is incomplete, can anyone offer anyway to help me finish it with a sad ending..Please comment
- Date: 01/11/2010
- Tags: last kiss heart broken final
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Comments (3 Comments)
- o0oTinker_Bellao0o - 03/13/2010
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Wow, Your very talented. I might have a suggestion for a ending. Just a thought really.
As my heart falls I feel a painful ache
I look at you with new eyes
A veil lifted from eyes
Maybe you weren't who I thought
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- Cati_many - 01/11/2010
- I think it's great! I adore it^^
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- Doll Shi - 01/11/2010
- It's perfect, I love all of your poems
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