On the way down

• Artist: Unfavoured Guest
• Description: Another war-themed poem. Very short, but quality over quantity!
• Date: 01/15/2010
• Tags: down bomb bombing

I’m the falling hunter,
You’re the grounded prey,
I’ll be as loud as thunder,
And bright as summer days.

My life will end quite quick,
But will not go to waste.
Just another click,
And goodbye, human race.

Comments

[missbillkaulitz10]

i thought it was awsume so good job i loved it 5/5

[pure seyelance]

i find you tried to hard to atempt to rhyme...but good effort...3/5