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I'm looking at you,
Wondering what you're gonna do.
I'm whispering into your ear,
I can feel your breath...its near.
I'm talking to you,
Wondering if you hear me...Do You?
I'm walking closer,
I watch your lips move as you whisper.
I'm screaming at you,
A tear rolls down my cheek and hits the ground right on que.
I'm crying,
Tired of trying.
I'm reaching out towards you,
The water...is no longer blue.
The water is stained red,
I'm praying that you're not dead.
I'm watching as you fall,
Do you hear me as I call?
This is your last breath,
Because the time has come...for your death
- by JelloPsychoSickness |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/03/2010 |
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- Title: Your Last Breath
- Artist: JelloPsychoSickness
- Description: I've been writing poems lately and this is one of the many
- Date: 02/03/2010
- Tags: your last breath
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Comments (3 Comments)
- x_iiSnowflake - 02/09/2010
- Very nice, overall. A few things I noticed that could've been improved. Maybe try to get your beats per line close to the same?? Good, though. =]
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- JelloPsychoSickness - 02/07/2010
- awe man..at the end when it says the time has come...for your last breath it should say for your death...damn! sorry
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- -l- Careless Whisper -l- - 02/03/2010
- wow, nice jello. very awesomness
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