I am

• Artist: blaze_MiKO
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• Date: 02/10/2010
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I am a shy girl who likes to read.
I wounder what the world will be like 20 years from now.
I hear birds whistling sweet tunes.
I see children playing together outside.
I want to travel around the world.
I am a shy girl who like to read.

I pretend that I am a story book character.
I feel the weight of bad memories on my shoulders.
I touch the stars as a protector of all creatures.
I worry about all the abused children of the world.
I cry for the people who loss loved ones.
I am a shy girl who likes to read.

I understand the sadness of losing someone close to you.
I say that all people are equal.
I dream of traveling to all points in the world.
I try to help others when I can.
I hope that mankind will stop war and unite.
I am a shy girl who likes to read.

Comments

[Vastrix]

I like it but even though I understand it is named "I am", there are just a few too many I's in that poem. Otherwise a good poem.

[Chelly17]

very nice....i like the jumping...makes it interesting... keeps you reading

[Kalilovegirl]

Not to bad but kinda jump scene to scene, just my opinion