sadness and dispair

• Artist: Gangsta_Candy_Girl
• Description: sadness is a cruel, cruel, CRUEL thing....(same with despair)
• Date: 02/26/2010
• Tags: sadness dispare

Never again shall i feel happy, Never again shall i feel whole, Never again shall i be tossed away like a piece of tissue, Never again shall i be used, Never again shall i be that girl, Never again

Comments

[Silencematters]

I totaly dissagree with her ideas*points below* I thought it was beautiful. I like your use of words and it was very inspirational. I love how though it has sadness in it their is a big since of strength to it as well. good job.

[Decaffeination]

I don't like it. Repetitive (not in a good way), too short (while short poems can be just as good as longer ones, they tend not to be so repetitive),pretentious (just my own analysis there) and nothing special at all in my opinion. Sorry.