Hope

• Artist: Jynx The Wolf
• Description: This is a poem that I thought of when I was bored. It's not my best piece, but I still like it. If you have any positive critism, please comment. Thank you!
• Date: 03/30/2010
• Tags: hope

Hope


The inspiration.
The reluctance.
The strength.
The weakness.

It is what fills us.
It makes us do what we do.
It powers us when there is no power.
It brings us down when there is none.


It is the moon.
It is the sun.
It is the sky.
It is the ground.

Everything relies on it,
To make them grow strong.
To fill them with a power,
And make them whole.

Hope.

Comments

[GlitteryKitties]

I like it but hope isn't an object. I think that the 'It is the moon It is'.. ect. part is pointless. It has nothing to do with that stuff. Would be awesome if you would change that part. 3/5