perfection

• Artist: thomlina
• Description: this is a little poem i wrote. please comment and take the advice to heart.
• Date: 05/27/2010
• Tags: perfection poetry message beauty

Perfection

I am not perfect.
No one is really.
Not even the girls who strive for perfection Or even the models on magazine covers
Perfect is what you believe it is
You are perfect the way you are
And you do not have to starve yourself
Or go on diets
Just be happy the way you are now.
Remember that.

Comments

[thomlina]

thank you. i will fix that.

[Stormgem]

Very good. Theres one thing here that bugs me a little, "Not even the girls who strive for perfection Or even the models on magazine covers "- here the 'Or even the models on magazine covers' needs to be a new line, as it kind of disrupts the overall metre/rythm of the poem. Other than that good!

[thomlina]

thank you

[MelroseHime3316]

nice, its a be true to urself poem, very nice.

[thomlina]

hello people comments are allowed and i would enjoy a comment or two...