Descending Into Darkness

• Artist: Deshi_Venshin594
• Description: Some say that as death descends you experience a blinding light. In my opinion this is what events transpire. Please comment.
• Date: 07/05/2010
• Tags: descentdarkness deshi

Falling, nothing but black night
The surroundings burned into my nightmares
Nothing but night and pain
The dreams come to reality
Falling, nothing but black night
Following a preset path
Wandered by souls before me
The watchmen signaling the way
Falling, nothing but black night
Looking at the others
No happy faces
Nothing but blank misery
Falling, nothing but black night
The faces haunting my dreams
Cold unwashed pained faces
Those of the others
Falling, nothing but black night
Awakening in a cold sweat
Hearing a kind voice
Sobbing from beside a bed
Falling, nothing but black night
Slipping back to night
Sounds trailing off
Fading into pain and blackness
Falling, nothing but black night

Comments

[Kisha-Senpai]

It is better then my own Poetry I write.

[MissSaylah]

I really like it, it made me feel cold, small and lost in this world. Great Job.