Rain

• Artist: Feudal-Vixen
• Description: I was kinda bored and thinking about the soothing sounds of rain,
  its kinda funny that i made three poems on rain just with that one thought.
  Hope u enjoy it! (I'm only typing one of them i might add the rest later)
• Date: 09/20/2010
• Tags: rain

it starts out slow, one drip at a time, soft and steady in pace
then it increases from drips to a drizzle
in a matter of seconds it becomes a downpour, drenching the land
rain is making the world clean again
giving nutrients to the plants and soil
filling streams, rivers, and lakes so fish have more room to swim and swivel
rain is giving life by giving water in a drizzle

Comments

[Rainbow Bunny of Doom]

I love it biggrin It's okay if you didn't capitalize if that was what you meant to do (though I can tell it wasn't xD)...Jack Kerouac and e.e.cummings rarely (if every) capitalized, and Kerouac was known for butchering the rules of grammar and punctuation to add to the spirit of his writing. It's hard to pull off though, I definitely can't do it D: Great job! I'll just read it and imagine the capitalization in my head >D

[Feudal-Vixen]

ack i didn't capitalize! that's embarrasing... >.<

[NerdyMiss]

Good poem, watch your capitalization though. ><