Letting You In

• Artist: maydaymouse
• Description: Personal, leave it at that. Read, comment, and rate if you wouldn't mind!
• Date: 11/12/2010
• Tags: letting regret love heartbroken

I made a mistake
I let you in
And in this dance
Nobody wins

Can't you see it?
Or are you blind?
I'm not who you think
You'll detest what you find

I'm far from perfect
Nowhere near it
This mold that you have
It's one that I don't fit

The angel you see
She's not all there
Can you not tell?
Or do you believe life is fair?

You have to get out
Leave, take your release
Please, do me this kindnes
I want your heart to be at peace

You deserve an angel,
The one that fills the mold
Who won't regret letting you in,
And she'll be yours to hold

I wish you a love
So pure and true
That when you look at her
The feelings will always seem new

I made a mistake
By letting you fall
And from my heart
That's the worst thing of all

Comments

[magic_doglover]

hm, very good. i like this one even more than the "Hope for the Forbidden" one. it resonates even more, and kind of espouses a message almost opposite to that other one. again, the rhythm could be better, but i'm not one to talk.

[MelroseHime3316]

wow, really good

[Arthenion]

I wouldn't change a thing, something very personal like you said yet people can feel the connection as well Good job smile