Sleep and Oblivion

• Artist: insane elf
• Description: Let me know what you think positive and negative appreciated!
  Especially the [bracket] near the end, it's something I thought of while typing but I don't know, over-kill or enhancement?
• Date: 12/15/2010
• Tags: sleep oblivion

Sleeping I lay down
Sleeping I fall.
After the last laugh
the last song sung.
Dancing I once spun immaculate
Once immaculate, I long ago stood proud.
Crying words fell upon barren soil.
There is no happiness
No love
No empathy
No hate
Only empty desire.
Spinning I fall singing.
Question asked
No reply
Empty expectations met.
Sleeping I fall to Oblivion's steel.
Sleeping I lay everything down
All tears
All laughter
All of me
All left at Oblivion's alter.
Sleeping I wake alone
Awake I cry.
Get up, fall spinning down, laughing and crying [all the while]
I do not try to get back up.
Oblivion comes back.

Comments

[Hot ChiherO]

I like it. It reminds me of alice and wonderland (falling down the rabbit hole).