What Do You Want Gaia

• Artist: Cat of Ice
• Description: what i want is people to stop being so picky about everything. i hear alot i dont like rhyming or i dont like free verse. well, its poetry. thats what it is. people rate too much on personal prefrance.
• Date: 01/27/2011
• Tags: want gaia

My rhyme and meter was good
And yet you rated me three
i did the best that i could
so what do you want from me?

I dont even have to rhyme
its still a poem you know
a simple type called free verse
not good enough for you though

i can speel as bd as i wont
it mii poem not urss
DOnt TeLl Me TU UsE CaPs eR GRAmeR
its still a free verse after all

it seems that whatever i do
isnt good enough for you
so tell me what you want from me
i'll tell you what i want from you

Comments

[Nemone]

Even though this is from a while ago, it's so true. Sometimes no matter how good it is people will give you a 3 or even worse. Makes me wonder what they think is worthy of a 5.

[Shibu Mizaku]

I actually enjoy free verse more. It can be a little more fluid, and I find it better when it doesn't have to rhyme all the time -_-

[Elani109]

You said it girl!! There are so many jealous people on here.No matter how perfect you know you are, these people let their bad emotions rule them. Instead of just telling the truth. if it deserves a 5 them give it a darn 5. smile 5/5

[kkwater]

I luv it! u cant please evryone, that is the world. if everyone liked the same thing, life would be boring, less inspiration. I really like this poem though

[Sifen Yamishi]

Bravo Rachel.Bravo.