I am the Egyptian

• Artist: Th3 PrInCeEsS
• Description: All of you of course..know what happened in Egypt starting from the 25th of January 2011... I wrote this..for my dear country Egypt, I love it so much..and I am ready to sacrifice my soul for it.
  Written on : 02/01/2011 (Month/Day/Year)
• Date: 02/02/2011
• Tags: egyptian

Egypt....
My dear country...

I never thought I love you that much
In the hard time and such

I drank from your Nile
I walked on your pure land
though life took me in it's style
Still I feel the hug of your sand

Your sun warmed me when I was cold
You never allowed my soul to be sold

Though tough time
When all the safe feeling was taken
I remember you and I remembered that you still keep me safe

As you take me in your arms
I feel that everything will be okay
Without my say
I feel it will be okay

You gave me your name as an Egyptian
Without my question for it....
Since I was born I was called the Egyptian

With my head held high
I will always say I am the Egyptian with the proud
Till I die
I will always say I am the Egyptian with the proud

I love you
I say it out loud
And I want everyone to hear my sound
Every body should do
I love you, I am the Egyptian!!!

Comments

[290DarkStars]

I wouldn't say "Ready to sacrifice your soul for it" because your soul is, well, yor f***ing SOUL! xD
Anyway, I enjoyed the poem - but it seems a bit unprofessional. It seems like you sat down to write a poem, so you started a rhyme, and then ended it. WHat you need to do is find a good sentence like "Your sun warmed me when I was cold" and instead of puting a 'forced rhyme' like "You never allowed my sould to be sold" nd flip it - it sounds less clunky, just letting you know ;P