when i see you

• Artist: Goddess Lynx
• Description: something i wrote for the guy im in lvoe with
• Date: 05/31/2011
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when i see you smile
it makes me forget
about everything bad
it brighten my day tp see you smiling

so much emotions
hidden iin your smiel
how you light up
when we are talking

you make me feel
all the things ive ketp
burried way deep down

you make me happy
i feel safe whenim with you
never upset when around you

to know you care
there nothing else like it

Comments

[Goddess Lynx]

thank you. and i will next time

[Hells_Song91]

love the poem expresses your emotions very clearly but next time try a little speel check it makes it more professional.