Under the Sky...

• Artist: mudkipofpower
• Description:
• Date: 06/27/2011
• Tags: under

Under the sky
is the land and the sea
the faces and faces
that plague you and me

the torment, the sorrow
the utter despair
cast down by the moon
and its pale golden stare

we lie on the pavement
look up at the stars
the voids deep inside us
so close yet so far

the sky now goes dark
the moon blotted out
we shut our eyes softly
and succumb to our doubt

Comments

[Tino x World Boss]

Alright, alright. I like this. Its deep and shows maturity. Try to embrass it more. I was hoping you would make this longer. It could've gone more and been perfect. All in all, you did well. NIce job. 3/5