Winter Kiss

• Artist: DeliciousMystery
• Description: Broken Hearted tale under the ice queens love
• Date: 12/23/2011
• Tags: winter kiss

Snow flakes fall from my eyes,
oh how they fall tonight
Somber evening daylight,
motionless beauty of night time

Bury the loneliness under the fluff
One man watches looking above
Floating down our lips touch
A frozen statue like all the rest
Curse of the winter mist

Comments

[Dual Limit]

I think that your poetry has a soft, romantic feel and the switch from soft to something eerie is nice. Though, just my opinion, I think you could put some more into it. ^___^