Lost in Limbo

• Artist: MooMoo Kitsume
• Description:
• Date: 06/06/2012
• Tags: lost limbo

When the lines are blurred
When right becomes absurd
You'll find me at the edge
At the fork of the road

You pit me to one side
I'd rather be in light
But find that path doesn't lead me home

So I wander in limbo
Through wrong and right
Until I find a haven
Where I'm safe for a night

But I am still hunted
The darkness finds me there
I could shout for help
But who would care?

Comments

[nbetweener]

You start out sounding political, but then descend into self-pitying mush. Your rhyme scheme doesn't take shape until the second half, but once there it works.