Voices in your head

• Artist: King Exseada
• Description: do you hear voices?
• Date: 07/27/2013
• Tags: voices your head

voices in your head
are they live or dead?
hear me calling
stars are falling
they are angels in the sky
look up what them fly
capturing spirits in the sky
listen to the why
do not wait til you die
are you the truth or a lie?

Comments

[Seltzer Cole]

What? Stars in the sky? Are you referring to the voices in your head as being stars in the sky? This poem kind of lost me. The little intro part was good but beyond that I became clueless. You have punctuation and spelling errors also.