Cornered

• Artist: HydraMaster1995
• Description: A poem I made after a bad breakup. This is my first post in over 10 years. Since then I have created a collection of poetry in my phone but haven't posted it anywhere. A friend of mine recently told me I should submit it somewhere and I remembered Gaias board for poetry and writing so here goes. I hope this can relate to you. if you want more just inbox me. I have to set my account back up after years of inactivity.
• Date: 06/24/2019
• Tags: corneredsadpoetry

This empty feeling of mine
Just when I thought I was fine
It all happened in one line
Crestfallen in my lonely shrine
My heartstrings as brittle as twine
Absent is the foundation of my spine
So tempted I am to resign
For no longer do I see the sunshine

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