doll eyes. (comments would be nice)

[Betty-Curse]

Remember that night you were on your own
Blinded by the stars up in the sky
Deafened by the voices inside your head
Everything you knew is now a lie
Dim the street lights down to darkness
You can see better in the night
Stand outside in the the world of love and lies
Nothing can stop you tonight
The reality has hurt you and tore you apart
All the times that noone cared
Now its the time to proove them all wrong
All the nights that you were scared
people you know now become people you knew
Crying yourself to sleep no longer applies
Screaming out loud hoping for everyone to hear
Feeling the pain behind your doll eyes  

[faerie_ophelia]

I really feel like I don't understand it, but, at the same time, something really seems to click. I love your format, and you have intriguing imagery.  

[chocolatecastleinthesky]

It's really good. I think it shows emotion well and it has great imagery. And it takes a little bit to understand it, when you do it's reallyg reat. Good job smile  

[Betty-Curse]

Thanks guys =] your comments are very uplifting smile xx