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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:25 am

Here today,
And everyday,
Has nothing at all to do.

But sit around,
Doing nothing,
Thinking 'bout me and you.

I know it's only two stanzas, but I think it's pretty good. What do you guys think?

Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 8:17 am

It's very good. It kind of gets you thinking a little.

sayaandtenshi

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Honeydukes Lover

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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 8:11 pm

Thanks. ^__^ I thought it was a little too short, but thanks. That means a lot.