And I put it in third person cause its hard for me to write in first person.
Twilight Alternate Ending
By Isaiah Agojo
By Isaiah Agojo
Bella’s eyes opened, it was all a blur for a while. She was lying on a hard surface, she was on the floor. There was a pounding near her that echoed in her head like a large drum. Time was slowing as the blurs surrounding her became darker and the echos became shorter and shorter and more focused until she heard the voice. That immaculate voice that she longed to hear for. The one that she needed to hear to make these confusing and unreal moments of time seem real. It was Edward’s, her beloved Edward. She was the happiest person in the world for a split second. Then she realized what the immaculate voice said.
“How could I let this happen?” were Edward’s words.
Then that moment everything focused. Nothing was blurred and everything was clear. Edward was there by her side on his knees. His fist placed into the middle of a large dent on the hard floor by his side. Bella became worried.
“Edward don’t worry I’m fine,” she tried to say but words couldn’t come out of her mouth. Only a whimper. She also knew it couldn’t be true, these few seconds that didn’t even match up to a minute were terrifying her.
Her heart then raced its beat getting harder and harder and louder and louder. Until the beat stopped completely and everything was silent. Everything in the room had slowed down. Then Edwards fist raised up from the dent in the floor. Her eyes saw it move at a speed and grace like you’d see in a slow motion movie, maybe it was Edward or it was her she did not know. Then she saw the fist drop, this time it was fast extremely fast. She could even feel the air a dust he pushed away while his fist came crashing down again. Then the fist hit the dent again this time passing through the floor. It was so deep most of his forearm was under the floor. Then the pounding sound of the penetration boomed in her ear in a long fading echo just like before.
What ever happened or was about to happen to her she knew it was nothing good. She felt icy cold fingers tracing across her cheek, it was Edward’s “Bella, I love you....” He said to her “Be strong.”
Her eyes slowly closed, but with a whisper she managed to say. “Kiss me.” And so Edward did. Lightly their lips touched she noticed Edward wasn’t the only cold one. She was too, extremely cold... just like Edward. Then Edward pulled back his lips from Bella.
“I’m so sorry I couldn’t prevent this.... forgive me” Edward whispered.
Then with that everything went calm. Silence, not like before it was more tranquil. Her breaths were slow and short. She was about to black out into a peaceful sleep. Then....
Her eyes opened as wide as they can. Her back arched into the air and she let out a giant scream. An extreme pain surged through her body. Her skinned felt like there were large gashes everywhere and then they were all being closed with a torch so the skin would melt over her wounds and then they opened again and the process happened over and over again. She could only afford short quick breaths in between the shrieks of pain. Her bones became cold, so cold that it burned like her bones escaped out of her skin and were scratching against an ice rink. Her muscles tightened and vibrated like they were about to blow out of her skin. She tried clenching her fists but the pain would only let her fingers bend only a little. Her eyes would not close through the extremely painful endeavor.
Then she screamed. “HEEELLP!!” and after the scream she coughed and continued to scream. Edward was still bye her side. He was watching the one he loves in pain, he couldn’t help her, he couldn’t touch her he couldn’t do anything but watch and it was even hard to do that. He was on his knees his arms dropped at his sides. He closed his eyes because it was almost unbearable watching her.
She cried and formed her screams into words. “WHY?!” was what she said the most. She had no idea what was happening to her. Then she stopped crying tears and started to cry blood! The red liquid ran down her face as her screams of pain continued.
With the scent of Bella’s blood Edward’s nose made a twitch. His eyes closed further until it took all his mental strength to keep them closed. Then his fallen arms became flexing fist. He had to keep control no matter what. Then his eye lids released revealing eyes that were black as coal and shined like the moon’s reflection on water.
“NO!!!!!” he screamed to the heavens. Then showing the teeth and not just his regular teeth. His fangs, they were growing out of the gums of his mouth. The fangs grew sharper until the point they could cut through anything. He became even paler, you could see some of the veins on his face. Edward’s face was no longer immaculate but now was demonic. Carlisle and Emmet reacted instantly Both of the grabbed each arm. Them both could barely contain him.
“EDWARD!!! NO!!!” She cried. Her love gave her the strength to hold onto Edward’s ankle before he was fully out of reach. With the touch Edward stopped resisting and dropped his head allowing his hair to block the vision of his vampire face. Before he left the room he repeated. “Be strong Bella... please be strong.”
There she lay alone in what she realized was the dance studio James lured her into. She stopped screaming because the pain seemed to have ceased. She breathed deeply much of her breaths were loud and weren’t exhaled but coughed. She continued to cry tears of blood and she couldn’t move at all the energy was stripped from her body. She cried asking god to help her.
“What’s happening to me...” she asked herself, she tried to look back at what happened. She was attacked by James and she was knocked out is all she can remember.
“James....” she said in her head. “What did he do? All he wanted to do was drink my blood and be finished with me... didn’t he?” She was positive that was all he wanted. She couldn’t imagine what else.
“Then what did he do?” she realized it was useless asking these questions. Then instantly another surge of pain flew through her body and she screamed again. Her back arched up into the air.
“EDWARD!” she screamed, and Edward was nowhere to be found. The tears of blood ran down her face.
All alone she lied there in pain. The shrieks passing through the walls. Then she asked the God that she wasn’t even sure that was real something. Something that she expected to happen when she came here to meet James. She asked the God that may not be there....
“K-kill me... please.” She knew she would rather die the spend another second in this type of pain. Though the prayer wasn’t answered. The pain continued.. For hours and hours the searing pain continued. She stopped asking why this was happening to her. She was asking for mercy, and Edward. Through all the things she was thinking of, all things she said in her head Edward was still behind it all. She wanted to die so badly, but she wanted to see him one last time.
She stayed in the room with no light just in the dark screaming. Although something strange was with her eyes. Although it was dark in the room... barely any light.... she saw everything. She only knew she was crying blood because she knew what the scent of blood was, but she never knew blood had a smell to a human before. This wasn’t just a smell though she began to grow a lust for the aroma of her own blood. She didn’t know why. Though she passed through these strange alterations in her body and soon forgot about them in her hours of pain.
The pain though it felt the same for so long, faded a bit. Not because the pain was going away. No, her body was becoming stronger. Her screams and shrieks of pain became just grunts and teeth grinding, because the screaming wasn’t worth it.
Bella started to count seconds.... her mind became more acute even in the everlasting pain. Her mind stopped thinking about all the questions she had she just became a robot, a living breathing robot. Counting the seconds she was in the room, enduring the pain and watching the ceiling do nothing but sit there and never aluminate its small dangling light bulb that seemed to sway to and fro, mocking her. She didn’t stop and she never faltered in her counting. She counted every last second until finally, for the first time, her eyes closed. The pain ceased and she blacked out.
***
She opened her eyes and popped instantly and said. “Forty-six million, six hundred eighty-eight thousand, five hundred thirty seven seconds. Two days nine hours and seventeen seconds.” Those numbers came from of nowhere. Her brain was so focused... she knew the seconds and converted them into real time. She amazed herself. She then noticed and hand lay rested upon hers. She was in a bed, in a room that was beautiful. It looked as if a queen would be astonished as well about how shined and clean and beautiful this room was. The hand that laid upon her’s belonged to Edward. She saw his face, beautiful as it was it, it was stone cold emotionless like a statue. The perfect faced boy refused to look at Bella.
“Edward? What’s wrong?” She asked him. He reluctantly turned his head towards her. “Bella, forgive me... I promise you if I could have prevented this I would have, but the poison seeped to far into you blood stream for any of us to suck it out.” he said. “I should have come earlier and saved you. It was all my fault... forgive me.”
“For what? What poison? I’m fine can’t you see?” She explained to him.
“You were in that dance studio for 3 days most of it spent screaming and crying my name.” She then remembered the dance studio and the pain she went through. She remembered what those numbers meant. When she started counting until she blacked out.
“Bella.... you’re a,” he took a long deep breath before he said what needed to be said. “You’ve become.... like me.”
“What do you mean you?” She asked not knowing what he was talking about.
“Bella... You’re a vampire.”
To be continued....
