Hey, tell me what I can improve on!

[Lady Cailynn of the White]

It's just a 10-minute sketch so it's not a best work, but I just want to know if there is anything I can improve on.

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a240/kari_foxwood/Kairi.jpg

This sketch took a bit longer than 10 minutes, but I want to know if there is anything I can do to improve it.

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a240/kari_foxwood/AyuAsakura.jpg  

[Carrielicious!]

To me, the first one looks like her boobs are pushed to her left. It doesn't look right to me.  

[Cascantelee]

Its very good! But I think her head is turned a little bit to much with the pose she's in.  

[Carenator]

Carenator Says

You're really good, uhh I can't find any mistake! :'D

Special Thanks To: DUCkYLiCiOUS (ILU.) :'D

Questing: Fallen Wish (10k/150k)

 

[dragon20074]

On the second one i would clean up the lines on the legs(not the fish nets they are fin) or if you are good at coloring i would color it.