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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:20 pm
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Hahaha sorry about the random title. But it made you click didn't it! :] [Actually, it's what I'm eating right now at this very moment]
Alright, for those of you who don't know me, just call me Elena, Lena, IR, or Joe. :] I'm pretty nice & love a good long constructive critism, even though I'm not good at giving them, oh weeeelll.
So: Fanfiction http://www.fanfiction.net/~elenakansi
Read the Anjali's Story please, I don't really like the other one at all. Read the Mel's Story pleaseplease and REVIEW!
Fiction Press http://www.fictionpress.com/~elenakansi
READ MY PROLOGUE PLEASE. and review. Elena loves reviews. ;]
um, I write poetry hardly never, but I did write one long one for a project & I'll post it, I suppose. Keep in mind my poetry's pretty bad.
B Some shameless self affiliation here :] TRoRR [The Realm of Random Roleplays] is my roleplay site. We are looking for some active, dedicated long term roleplayers. If this is B breaking any rules I apologize.
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 1:11 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:16 pm
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hahaha, alright, well I think i recommended the book it's based on in the book thread. Oh well.
Did you see any areas of my writing that needed improvement? [if you read it]
ED: hahaa, see, an example of my much needed improvement-poetry [not what i was originally going to post]
untitled.
![User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.](https://graphics.gaiaonline.com/images/s.gif) There are two, Where there should be one. And the books don't say What should be done.
My heart is torn, And I cannot cry. My eyes are open, and my cheeks are dry.
They cannot see what they have done. But I see too clearly, and I want to run.
But run I cannot, for now you too know, If my heart is with them, I cannot go.
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 9:45 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 5:08 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:34 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:34 am
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 1:35 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 1:42 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:24 pm
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FOUND IT!
Yay! It's not as good as I orignially thought, but hey, it's good enough for me!
Queen Elizabeth I
The year is fifteen forty-seven, and my father is now in heaven.
London is filled with sorrow, Eagerly it seeks the morrow.
It's filled with discord and unhappiness, This monarchy has become a big mess.
My brother Edward, only ten, Becomes the new king when Big Ben
Chimes thrice. Ding Ding Ding
I am fourteen, Very green,
But Ed is still less prepared For the work entailed.
I am afraid being king will kill him, The luster in his eyes will grow dim.
This burden is too much! He needs a mother's loving touch!
But because she is dead, Ed will be king instead.
The crown is brought down on his brow, His face is not happy, scrunched up like a sow.
All hail the new king, the trumpets blast, And finally, the coronation is over at last.
My sister Mary looks somewhat sad, But inside I bet she's seething mad.
For she is the eldest at thirty-one, And should be queen when it's all said and done.
But she, like me, has been cast from the line, Never to see a crown, to inherit a gold mine.
Edward parades around town square, His innocent eyes meeting some icy stares.
At last we return to the castle tiredly, Edwards greets his bed with glee.
Now I retreat to my quarters at last, I close my eyes and lay down fast.
The dream world, it takes me, Across the century to see,
Dreams of my father, my sister and brother, The one with the hidden face is my mother.
One by one, they fall away, Death takes them all, just not today.
Eventually I'm the only one who stands, Left alone to guard my lands.
In come the Spanish, with their ships, I am here, a speech pouring from my lips.
The crowd, it cheers, ready to take up arms. And I am sure England will not befall any harms.
The Armada retreats in fear, The crowd begins to cheer!
My eyes open quickly, as I jump out of bed, Thoughts of the nation circle in my head.
I rush to my writing desk, smiling with glee, And write down the speech that comes to me.
For now I know that whatever may come, The nation of England will stay as one.
*Just a note, I wrote this as a project a long time ago, the dates should be historically accurate, but last year I read some historical fiction and realized that King Henry was not as loved as I orignially thought when writing this. Uh yeah, and just in case you didn't know, Ed, Elizabeth, and Mary all had different mothers.
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Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 7:13 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:20 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:37 pm
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