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 Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:43 pm
why, hello there. i am a new member and... well i love to write. poems, lyrics, short stories... and i'm writing a novel, called Half Empty. I'll probably post a bit of that later, though...
so i think i'll be putting on here some of my recently-written poems... and others, if i feel like it. domokun
mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:44 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:52 pm
With Me
Would you comfort me?
If i would lose control?
Would you cry with me?
Till the end of my sorrows?
Can't you see?
I'm coming undone at the edges.
But it seems you don't care at all,
Don't think of me.
I wish I had a camera
For those lovely summer days
Because those times never last
I wish you would come
And sit with me,
Cry with me
And make things okay...
But you disappoint me more and more.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:54 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:58 pm
If I fall
If I fall
If I fall
Will you catch me?
I'm standing on the edge
Trying not too look down
But its an impulse I can't ignore
And when I look, nobody's around
If I fall
If I fall
Will you catch me?
I'm trying not to be
The way I was before
Because you've changed me for the better
Now Ive got to step through the door
(It's not that easy)
If I fall
If I fall
Will you catch me?
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:01 pm
We Can't
Right now,
You can't touch me
You can't hold me
Like somebody else could
Right now,
I want you
But I think I'd regret
It's not your fault
There's many, many scars
Right now,
I want to show my self
For what I really am
But there's the constant reminder
I'm not good enough
I won't meet your standards.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:26 pm
Know Me
where were you in my life?
where were you when i cried?
Where were you when i graduated the second grade?
sometimes i would cry
Because you weren't there
Now I'm searching you out
But it's not the same here
You spent my whole life hiding
And when you had to come
Maybe I was just practice
For a new, better one
I had my chance,
I threw it away
'Cause I really don't know you
I was freaked out,
You surprised me
But you couldn't've said anything, anyhow.
You really don't know me
And I don't know you
But, exactly,
Whose fault is that?
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:32 pm
Why They Loved
She sat on the ground and cried
He came to her and looked into her eyes
He sat and said Tell me
She heard and said Kiss me
He looked and saw beauty
She looked and saw misery
He waited for her forever
She saw only a blur
She loved him still
His world stood still
For her, and only her
And that's why they loved
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:37 pm
You Say Back
I loved you so
I used to say
But they didn't reply
Now, when I say it, I mean it.
And when you say it back,
I almost die.
You will never turn your back like they did
not so long ago.
You tell the truth to me
And i would never lie to you.
I have not seen you
And you not me
But maybe that's the magic
Of our lovely memories
When i and feeling down
You are down there with me
And you astound me so
How could you be crazy?
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:51 pm
Wow, I think you're very Talented!
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:53 pm
Anneechin23 Wow, I think you're very Talented! thank you! biggrin
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 8:03 pm
your poetry is full of deep passion and I love it. I can't wait to read more!
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 8:11 pm
sooo beautiful ~sniff~ it your poems remind me of myself when i was selfish and shy about love
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 9:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 3:24 pm
i feel special... biggrin
by the way... they're not all about... the same person, if you were thinking that... but i suppose some of you weren't... but just saying... you know, just in case... sweatdrop
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