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[RavendorFoxx]

This is where you post your latest furry art pics and show it off. You can ask for critiques and comments on your art n stuff. Follow gaia TOS, please... but otherwise anything goes really. Show your stuff artists! 3nodding  

[Fennec Dreamer]

The Dozen Roses
A dozen roses I gave to you.
A dozen roses, not one or two;
But a bouquet of flowers just from me.

The roses are red and as beautiful as ever,
But one is different from the rest, and it’s meaning I’ll endeavor.

It is just like the others in that it is red.
It is surrounded by the rest - next to your bed.
In the vase with others all beautifully cut.
If I told you it was fake you would call it a bluff.

Let me tell you what it means.
It does not mean our love is fake;
Something so perfect cannot be a mistake.
It represents my endless love.
It is ever so pure and as white as a dove.

When I gave you those dozen roses, this is what I said that night.
“I will love you until the last rose left has wilted and died.”

I will love you forever no matter the conditions.
Just as this weather proof rose - colored with dye.

Nothing will ever change the way I feel.
As long as I have you and my love in your heart,
I will love you always.
I will never depart.

A dozen roses I gave to you that special day.
I told you the truth and I would never lie.
I will love you forever; every night and every day.

One hundred winters quickly went by
I now lay in the ground next to your side
A single fake flower sits in between-us,
Next to our bed, in a vase by your side


Please comment and critique it

 

[RavendorFoxx]

It's very good, Fennec. Good job, man.
It has a good strong meaning to it, and it's very romantic. It doesn't "flow" though, if you know what I mean. It's difficult to say because you have to keep thinking about the words whilst you're saying it.
BUT, that's poetry sometimes, and I think it's amazing. Well done. *wags tail*  

[Serov]

Art = here  

[Fennec Dreamer]

I had to follow a certain pattern because it was a school assignment and the pattern doesnt flow well. I had the thought of the dozen roses stuck in my head for a long time though the assignment let me put it into words.

Heres one I call Shadows. This one flows much better.

Shadows

My time with you has been short yet sweet
Why do I feel this way about you?
The kindness and friendship you have showed me cannot be beat.
The way we feel we both see it’s true
Yet problems arise unsurpassable.

You look at me I look at you
I hold you close to me
You turn away with tears in your eyes
Turning away from our friendly ties.
You have fallen for me
But you know I have someone at my side

You fall away from me
Fading away like the night on a brand new day
Like a magnet that wants to get away,

You can’t be near me as a friend
You can’t shake this feeling
These emotions you can’t pretend

I tell you, you are like a shadow
You will always be here with me
Always connected throughout eternity

You are a friend I will always care about.
Even though we can’t be as one I will always be there
By your side like a shadow stroking your hair.

Though I may love somebody else,
You dwell in my heart and mind

You are still my shadow
And I will never forget about you
The kindness and friendship you have showed me can not be beat
The kindness and friendship you have showed me has made me complete.

 

[RavendorFoxx]

Damn... That's fantastic... sounds like A predicament I was in for a while... and that I'm still going through.. sort of... ninja Very much so...
I like it a lot. Good job, man. Kudos. 3nodding

I'll post a few of my own when I get a chance later.  

[RavendorFoxx]

These are some lyrics I wrote a long while back... the first set that were actually worth showing anyone... It was in the days in high school when I was getting massive amounts of inspiration for my story and poetry up the yin yang...
So, yeah... It's old...

Ravendor's Oath
Is it true
For the heart of night
Is it right
For the Soul of light
Risen from a long deep sleep
Ravendor arose to keep
A promise made to world so grim
It made a fatal blow to him

(chorus)
It can't be true
It can't be right
A soul of light
and a soul of night
They met on odd
and dreary day
fighting side by side
he prayed
in his heart to die again
to save him from this fate within
but when he looked into her eyes
it gave him strength to arise
he realized ...
there was still hope

The heart of night
a vampiress
Mekai
seemed treacherous
But though a demon
she appeared
her soul was pure
her heart indeared
she would not be defeated
by this strange new feeling within
but this man she met so recently
had something extra in him

(chorus)

They beat their foes
and journeyed far
They endured woes
of Ravendor
They found his ring
in mountain peak
his power regained
this time to keep
Back to home they traversed
never knowing
his ring was cursed

A fit of energy
he felt
destroying all
till his anger was dealt
Just in time
he stowed it all
into his sword
for more control
Before he fell down
to the ground
Mekai caught him
and brought him `round
they both felt something
though it seemed untrue
their eyes showed all
that love embues

(chorus x2)



And this is one of my more recent ones that I did randomly after an exam in A school, so still a few months ago, but yeah...

Celestial Glory and pain

Rocks and stones
collide with ground
making a thud/cracking sound
Reverberations shake the earth
and bring forth her majesty's rebirth
sprouts of light and sparkles of joy
bring forth blossoms
and Hell's decoy
FUrries frolic and fight for fun
Basking in the warmth of the sun
But ancient races of ancestry
return from earth greedily
War begins and fun is lost
Now existence comes with a cost
Battles rage and joy is gone
Until the Prophet sings her song
Once again, the foxes can play
Until the dark voices come to stay
Chaos, the dark ones bring forth
"THe impure breeds have no worth.
Purge them all from our home, the earth."
The heavens impart a heavenly gift
the hearts of the good ones needed a lift
The dark ones defeated, the light brings a song
No more bloodlust
no more wrong.
All is gleeful, all is bliss
bring forth happiness, give her a kiss
A heavenly song awakens the earth
The rocks, tree, all life laughs and "merfs"
But be wary, my friend, this day
FOr recklessness can make you prey
Darkness is not gone, but merely hidden.
Until the day another evil one is bidden.
But keep the faith and sing the song
Let joy fill your day, let it prolong
Let dark thoughts waste away
Bring forth glory and hope this day
For your sword and mine should never rebound
You are my brother
You have been found
Fighting is pointless, there's nothing to gain
Death bring about sadness, despair and pain.
Let us work together and you will see
there is much we can learn, you and me.
The dark lords of Hell and the avatar of hope
The celestial gods and bright silky rope
Time and Trial, Ties and Ends
Loops and whirls and knots and bends
Endless rope and time and glee
destiny and bended knee
We are one, you must see
Strands in time, threads are we.
Join us in our exaltation
Come with us in adoration
Be our friend, my friend.  

[Cortana_Seramiphia]

I just finished this smile  

[Shard Of Ronin]

Wolfie on Deviantart  

[Zieko]

Now I don't have a fancy Deviantart page or a Furaffinity page. I just have a photobucket cuase I don't have a computer. Just an Itouch and wireless.
I have recently only decided to get serious with my drawings and I finished a drawing of my dog as a furry a few weeks ago. I will show it. I'm kinds embarrased but I need to know what I did wrong and how I can improve. So... Please crit. my drawing. X_X
This is Missy  

[RavendorFoxx]

cyborg zav

Now I don't have a fancy Deviantart page or a Furaffinity page. I just have a photobucket cuase I don't have a computer. Just an Itouch and wireless.
I have recently only decided to get serious with my drawings and I finished a drawing of my dog as a furry a few weeks ago. I will show it. I'm kinds embarrased but I need to know what I did wrong and how I can improve. So... Please crit. my drawing. X_X
This is Missy

Awwww... so cute. whee
I'd say work on the tail a little bit so that the shape is a little smoother. It looks kinda like a piece of tattered yarn.
Also, something about her snout seems a little... diproportionate or misshapen or something... idk... It looks good, though. Better than I can do. Good job. ^^ Keep practicing.  

[AlishkaNix]

my deviantART. you can take a look if you want; comments and criticism are always welcome, as i'm always looking toward improvement ^_^

AlliNix @ dA  

[Kitsune no Gatsu Mei]

Wow Ravendor, that's really good. I can't say I've written many poems or lyrics, but I'll post the two best. Mind you though, I'm still just a sophomore in high school, so I still have a bit of time to improve. Critique away!

Bleeding Rose (poem)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Death blooms like a delicate flower
The beautiful scent flowing forth
Embrace the numbing pain it brings
For ne'r is the smell so sweet

As the black rose bleeds, then so do I
You cut me ever deeper
I long to feel the cold numb breeze
Upon deaths door to stand

And I shall take his hand

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Faded Memories (lyrics)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Faded memories
Slowly killing me
Life inside my hand
One step towards the edge

Blade inside my fist
Closer to my wrist
One swift motion made
Soon my life to fade

And I bleed

And yes, they are rather depressing, but this was from a part of my life where everything felt like it was falling out from under me. That's when most of my inspiration sparked. Now I'm just Soji-kun, a hyper little kitsune who needs to find inspiration. n_n  

[Sheba Metaluna]

I am not as good as a lot of artists on here but i did this today

 

[Sheba Metaluna]

anyone?