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 Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:38 pm
{Poem #1}What becomes of Snow?
[This is a poem that just randomly popped into my head. Hope you like it!]
The nippy days of winter,
Are coming to an end.
Snowy are the grounds, all through-out the country.
But the question still rings about the peoples' ears.
What becomes...of snow?
Is it the florecent smell of wildflowers?
Or perhaps, the warm sensation of the beaming sun?
The anwsers are endless to a vivid imagination.
Anwsers like these are common,
For many a person,
Do not understand,
The importance of a day.
What becomes of snow?
Only the day that blossoms,
Below the melting snow,
Will tell.
[Yes, yes, I know it's crappy.
I hope to hope more poetry in this thread later.
Until them, solong!]
{Poem #2} Moonlit
Walking along the moonlit curb,
Memories...memories...
Such sweet memories,
Filled my mind.
Of days past,
When all was well,
For we were together,
happy as could be.
Walking along the moonlit curb,
Memories...memories...
Such sorrowed memories,
Filled my mind.
Of days past,
When all was wrong,
For we were apart,
Broken in pieces,
Are hearts were.
Walking along the moonlit curb,
Memories...memories...
Such lovely memories,
Filled my mind.
Of days forth,
When all will be flourished,
By the light of day,
The smell of roses,
The humming of the birds and the bees.
Walking along the moonlit curb,
The light shining brightly,
Amongst the sparkling lake,
Re-kindling the love,
Lost within my heart,
Of black.
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 9:44 pm
I like this poem because it's very smooth, it rolls on the tongue. I like it alot, keep on truckin', k?
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 6:47 pm
No witty, it's not at all crappy. It's very good. Although it's sorta confusing, it makes the reader think. Takes you to a level most people forget about during the boring of everyday life.
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 4:34 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 4:40 pm
Hmm...*thinks of another poetry topic*
I might have a good one...
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 5:03 pm
I agree with what those people said. I love your poetry. It's really interesting and fun to read! 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 6:47 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 11:06 am
Witty, I want you to post more of your work. If you have anymore, PLEASE post it as soon as possible because I love your poetry. I want to read more!
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