Sonne

[Myou_Sama]

I wrote this for a contest I am going to enter. It is based off the song "Sonne" by Rammstein. It's a song in German, but I have it translated into English too... It's not very good... It's not posting right, so I will put it in the next post, I geuss.  

[Myou_Sama]

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[Myou_Sama]

That's it! Please tell me what you think!  

[frozenapathies]

How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good!  

[Myou_Sama]

Tellius

How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good!

Thank you! I did use spell check. By spelling errors do you mean things like 'there' instead of 'their'? I do that a lot.... sweatdrop  

[frozenapathies]

Myou_Sama

Tellius

How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good!

Thank you! I did use spell check. By spelling errors do you mean things like 'there' instead of 'their'? I do that a lot.... sweatdrop

Yea, that's exactly what I was talking about. I do alot to, but I usually catch myself when I read through it. Keep it up!  

[Myou_Sama]

Tellius

Myou_Sama

Tellius

How could you not think thats good? I enjoyed reading that, however there are a few spelling errors, but other than that its pretty good!

Thank you! I did use spell check. By spelling errors do you mean things like 'there' instead of 'their'? I do that a lot.... sweatdrop

Yea, that's exactly what I was talking about. I do alot to, but I usually catch myself when I read through it. Keep it up!

I will read through it again! Thatnk you for the advice!