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Hiyukura

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:13 pm
So Lets get this straight




This is from my journal I wrote about a year ago xd And I never finished it. I am going to write everyday now so watch this place fill up with chapters. It may not be good though. I made it before Sasuke ran away so it may be not where you are now. But it will go to shippuen someday. biggrin Well here is what you can post and what u can't




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3. Yes there is SOME made up characters but its still like it so do not fuss.



Okay If I find anyone doing something bad I will make a grey list. biggrin You dont want that do you? And it may say it came out tomorrow it wont biggrin Im just posting what I did biggrin
Now be paitient I need to make some editings.


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If you are on this you may bug me as many times as u want for hurrying up, You will be able to tell me to say a continuation, and you can bug me with anything! But to show ur love you can donate to my Staff of the Angels I want. I'm giving this thing for you for free so please be thakful Nya~


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1. When I am writing please do not disturb. You will know when to write when I say Writing Time! That means anyone can write about what they think. It lasts for little time though. We will have to get to the next part soon y'all know. And Naruto specials come out when someone has joined tmy fan fic lover group.  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:19 pm
Part 1
Goodnite

One day, Sakura was walking to the hidden Leaf Village wha she saw Sasuke with a weird girl. Little did she know that these two were in love. She went over to Sasuke to ask why he was with her when she saw a ring on her finger that said

To Sakurie, my true love From Sasuke

She jumped at the sight and hit Sakurie in the nose. Sakurie fell to the ground and said: "You shouldn't be jealous....."

But by then, Sakura had fainted from seeing lipstick all over Sasuke's face... Nurses came over and when she awoken she saw Sasuke looking worried at Sakurie. He asked if she was alright. Sakura looked over staring at Sakurie. Sakurie looked at her as if she was about to kill her. Then Sasuke turned around looking at Sakura. Sakura started blushing but then put her face down where she was. She did not want to see Sasuke with Sakurie again.


Part 2 will come out tomorrow


P.S. I do not think this is good. The next part is weird too >.< But o well it will become better soon I guess.
 

Hiyukura


Hiyukura

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:30 pm
Part Two
Unusually


Sakura woke up the next day in a strange room, with other villagers. She saw that Kakashi was there, reading his book like always....
"Sensei, what are u doing here?" Sakura questioned.
"I remember seeing you faint on the floor, and I woke up here and decided to read," he answered.
Then as he said those words, the girl named Sakurie appeared behind the bars and said, "Sakura-Chan, please step forward."
Sakura stood up as if she was being controled and floated in mid air to this feindish woman. The gate was opened and Sakura was taken to an interrigation room.
"Who do you work for?" asked the Sakurie.
"Where's Sasuke?" Sakura demanded.
"He's right here," she answered as they brought Sasuke in the room.
"Sasuke, how can you betray the hidden leaf village like this?" asked Sakura.
"No one ever cared about me except Sakurie..." He replied as he held her hand.
"That's a lie because I care about you more that she does along with Kakashi and Naruto." she cried out.
"Lies I tell you lies!!!!" screamed Sakurie louder than ever.
"Take her away," demanded Sakurie.
As Sakura screamed as she was taken away, Sasuke began to wonder about who to trust and who to love..... She cried herself to sleep in the chamber. "I wish I never knew Sasuke that Baka!" She shouted. Sakurie ran in and said "Shut up you big foreheaded girl." Sakura started to get mad but held in her anger and said "Sasuke will never love you as much as I do." Sakurie slammed her feet. "Hes aready in love with me and you cannot change that." Sakura let out her anger and said "Will you just leave you darn slut!" Then Sakurie ran in sadness and Sakura wondered Will she tell Sasuke what I just said... And she started to hear voices far away... Then someone came in and Someone put sleep powder on Sakura. She didn't see it good but someone she knew did that. Probably Sakurie or Sasuke.



Tomorrow:
Part Three
Sasuke and escapes
 
PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:39 pm
Part Three
Sasuke and Escapes

That night, Sasuke went to the cell where Sakura and Kakashi were being kept.
"Sakura, wake up," whispered Sasuke.
Sakura woke up right away along with Kakashi.
"What's going on!!!!" yelled Kakashi.
"Quickly, come on," Sasuke replied as he opened the door to them.
"Sasuke, what are you doing?" whispered Sakura.
"Go get help. Hopefully you can get Gaara and the leaders of the villages to come here and help us. Sakurie plans to take over the villages one by one. We can't let that happen, " whispered Sasuke.
"You'll have to come with us," said Sakura.
"I can't, Sakurie will notice. Naruto is waiting outside to escort you guys to the next village," replied Sasuke.
"Alright then," Kakashi started,"I'll give you alone time. Meet you out side then Sakura."
"I don't want to leave without you," Sakura said as she took Sasuke into her arms.
"Just hurry going to the villages. There are 8 of them. There is the (hidden) village
of the Mist, Cloud, Sand, Rock, Sound, Rain Waterfall and, Grass," Sasuke said.
As he said these words, she leaned over and kissed him. Stepping away from him after that was the hardest thing she had ever done, besides the chounin exam.
She stepped away from him and began walking towards the exit.
He ran after her and he began to kiss her.
After that he said, "I love you."
"I love you too," replied Sakura.
She ran off outside where she met up with Kakashi and Naruto who kept asking where were you, and what took so long? as they headed to the hidden Village of Sand. Naruto replied "Answer my question!" Then Sakura started blushing "It wasn't anything..." Then Kakashi stared at Sakura. What happened... He thought....
 

Hiyukura


Hiyukura

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:42 pm
Part 4
Unheard Feelings

On the way to the the next village, Sakura couldn't help but wonder. She wondered about Sasuke mostly and what had come over him. She thought "It must be because of what I've said." which answered 1 of 2 questions. The 2nd question was why don't I feel happy inside. Sakura had this crush on Sasuke for years and years, almost like forever but what she thought what her 1st kiss would be, it wasn't. Maybe I'm not mature enough for this, or maybe I don't like Sasuke anymore than a friend.

"We are getting close, believe it" said Naruto as he saw a mark he had made on his way to the hidden leaf village. Naruto had married Hyuga Hinata after a few years of dating. They were in the village of sand for there honeymoon, when Naruto heard of the abandoned taking over the leaf village.

"Naw, duh," answered Kakashi sarcastically.

Sakura started to laugh, and felt something inside her, a feeling she never felt for any guy in her life.....
Then she started walking with Kakashi staring at him. Why did she have a weird feeling. I don't really think I LOVE sensei. I just like him as sensei. But why? Sakura asked herself. Just then something said "You will soon find out why.."
 
PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:55 pm
Part 5
The Hidden Village of the Sand

"There it is,"said Naruto as loud as possible.
"Wow," said Sakura and Kakashi in unison. They both looked at each other and blushed. Naruto's eyes widened as he thought of what that could mean, but he smirked and let that go.
They started walking through the village to the otherside where the leader was. Many of the villagers started to aviod them, since the relationship between the villages weren't really "friends" as you would put it.
Then, Naruto saw the leader at the time who was in charge of the military, Gaara.
"What do you guys want?" Gaara said as they approached his tea area, where he spent everyday since Sasuke defeated him in the chounin exam years and years ago.
"We need your help." stated Sakura as she stepped out from behind Naruto.
"Believe it," added Naruto. After all those years, those were the two words he refused to give up as he got older.
"Well, what do you need my help in?"replied Gaara as blunt as can be.
"The Hidden Leaf Village is under attack. Sasuke and his fiance, Sakurie has taken everyone to jail with the help of the Akatsuki and is planning to rule everyone." said Kakashi
"Why should I help you?"
"Becuase you'll be next. We are talking about the Akatsuki here. They are more powerful then your armies combined," replied Kakashi as he got up in Gaara's face.
"Alright. What's your plan?"
"We get all the villages together and we fight back with the armies combined. One army isn't enough," Sakura said as she answered for Kakashi.
"She's right you know," said a voice out from behind Gaara. It was Gaara's wife, Yoshiru who he had married when he came home to the village and was voted to be the leader, since they feared him.
"We are the closest village to theirs and we are certainly next."
"Ok then. Tomorrow we all will split up into groups and go to each village. Sakura and I will go to the village of the Syone and Waterfall, Gaara will go to the village of Rain and Grass with some of your men, Yoshiru will go to the village of Sound with guards of your's, Hinata will go to the village of Cloud,and Naruto will go to the village of Mist," said Kakashi before Anyone could say anything.
"Alright then. Guards, please show them to thier rooms," said Gaara.
As they walked to the rooms, Sakura wondered why had Kakashi said that they would both go together.
"Here are your rooms," said the guard.
OMG!!!! She was sharing a room with Kakashi since there weren't enough rooms!!!
Everyone else had thier own rooms but her!!!! "I think Gaara is doing this on purpose," she murmered to herself.
That night she couldn't sleep. She was in her underwear in the same room as Kakashi who was in his underwear sleeping across the room from her.Then she heard footsteps behind her. It was Kakashi. He thought she was asleep because he was confessing to her. He sat down on her bed and looked down at her
"Sakura, I know you're asleep but there's something you need to know," he started.
"I felt something today and I'm just confused. You know today when we said wow at the same time. I think I love you but I don't know how to tell you. At first when I met you four years ago I thought we were just friends but know it's different. I also remeber a couple days ago when we were in jail and I saw you, oh, you were beautiful. But I also know that you love Sasuke, I don't even know why I'm botering telling you this. Maybe because you feel the same or maybe because I can't sleep. Yeah, you must think I'm pretty crazy, " he said as he put his head down and stared at the floor. He loved Sakura and she felt the same way too, so she decided she can't do this anymore.
"No I don't," she said as she opened her eyes to see his face, with no mask, looking down at her with eyes wide open. "Because I love you too."
She came close to his face and they were nose-to-nose.
"But I thought you loved-"
"Me too, but that kiss told me something."
"What did it tell you?"
"That I love you."
She leaned over and they shared a passionate kiss at 12:00 in the morning in there underwear.




Meanwhile....

"How could you let them get away??!?!?!!?!??!!?!?" Sakurie yelled at Sasuke who was chilling and sitting in thier furnished home.
"I didn't. The guard did."
"Is this true?" Sakurie asked the guard who was there.
"NO! Those people were useless people and powerless Sasuke tells me, " replied the guard.
"The man that you let go is Hatake Kakashi ad the girl you let go is Haruno Sakura!!!" she yelled.
Sakurie stormed out the room. Sasuke chased after her and calmed her down later on, but it took ALOT of work if you know what they did.......
 

Hiyukura


Hiyukura

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:07 pm
Part 6
Finding Help

The next morning Sakura woke up in Kakashi's arms. She looked at his face which had no mask on like she would usually see him with. Sakura started to rub his face affectionately, then his eyes slowly opened.
"Goodmorning sweetheart," Kakashi whispered.
"Goodmorning my love," Sakura replied.
As they said these words there was a knock at the door. Kakashi got up and answered it.
"Goodmorning Kakashi and Sakura," said Gaara.
"Goodmorning Gaara," they both said in unison again.
"The Akatsuki has invaded us this morning with a large army.I will have some of my men like you said last night take you to your location," said Gaara.
"No, Gaara, you need to defend your people. Let your solidiers go with everyone else except me and Sakura," Kakashi replied.
"Very well then, get up and I'll have breakfast taken to you. When you're done meet us in the sparring room so we can get ready," Gaara said.
"Ok then," Kakashi replied. Gaar then left swith worry in his eyes.
"Did you hear that Sakura?"asked Kakashi.
"I sure did. You were right to tell him to not let any solidiers come with us," replied Sakura.
"Ok then, we need to get dressed."he said as he went over to where his clothes were.
"Kakashi?" Sakura asked.
"Hmm?" replied Kakashi.
"What will people think of us?"
He went over to her bed and sat down with a serious look on his face.
"What do you mean? Kakashi replied as he started to put his hands through her soft pink hair.
"You know the age difference between us. I'm 18 and you're 32. We are 14 years apart from each other?"asked a concerned Sakura.
"It doesn't matter. It never has. I look at other people and yes, I see people in there age groups but it still doesn't matter,"relpied Kakashi.
He leaned over and gave her a kiss.
"You know, we still need to get dressed still," said Sakura under her breath.
"Oh right," Kakashi said looking away from her as he blushed.
They got dressed and as they put there shoes on, there was another knock on the door. It was a maid with breakfast.
"Thanks," Sakura said as she closed the door.
The two love birds ate breakfast real quick and then headed to the sparring room, holding hands.
As they went in, Naruto's eyes were wide open.
"I knew it, I knew it. I knew it. Beleive it!!!!!"yelled Naruto.
"Anything else to say?" asked Gaara.
"No...."
"Ok. To bussiness. Each of you will get tons of shurikens, kunais, and haris. The Akatsuki isn't looking for you so you won't need alot of weapons. They are just rampaging our village and then they will go back to the Hidden Leaf Village.Sakura and Kakashi will go to the village of the Stone and Waterfall, I will go to the village of Rain and Grass with some of my men, Yoshiru will go to the village of Sound with guards of your's, Hinata will go to the village of Cloud with gaurds ,and Naruto will go to the village of Mist with guards as well," said Gaara. "Are we clear on this?"
Everyone nodded.
"Ok. Let's start to head to our destinations,"Gaara said as he handed out weapons.
After Naruto was done, Naruto went over to Kakashi who was alone.
"So, you have a thing for Sakura. What will Sasuke say when he hears this?"
"I don't care and neither does she," Kakashi replied as he stared at Sakura getting her weapons.
"So that is why you said that both of you will be together on this trip, withut solidiers?"
"Yeah. I love her," replied Kakashi.
"I'm ready," Sakura said as she popped out of nowhere.
"Ok. Bye everyone. Becareful,"said Sakura as she got out of the room, never going to see them for a week.
"I love you Sakura,"Kakashi said as they both started thier journey.
"I love you too Sensei," said Sakura.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:10 pm
Part 7
Rock a bye baby

Over the next week, all went according to plan. Every representative did their job and got the villages they visited to help them. All but one. The Hidden village of waterfall. Here is what happened on that unfaithful day.

The two lovebirds were walking through the rough terain when they saw a few people give them eyes as sharp as the kunais in their hands. The Waterfall village never liked the village of Kohona for one reason or another, ever. Maybe because they were jealous of the greatness they had. Or maybe because they had something they didn't. Either way, they weren't "friends".

"What are you doing here??!!?" yelled a wierd looking countrymen as they entered the village.
"We have come to talk to your leader, " exclaimed sakura.
"You are but simple Kohona people. Our leader wouldn't want to talk to you."
"Well who is your leader anyways?" questioned Kakashi.
"A Uchiha Sasuke," exclanied a womanly voice with a rather formiliar ring to it. "You are a real hard person to get to Haruno sakura, and Hatake Kakashi."
It was Sakurie. All of a sudden people near them became ninjas and ninjas of higher ranks.
Kakashi beat them up with the little weapons they had. As he killed the last ninja, Sakurie came up behind him and stabbed him with kunai. Sakurie disappeared in a flash, leaving Sakura seeing the man she truly love die befor her eyes.
Kakashi fell to the ground as sakura ran over catching him before he touched the ground.
"Sensei, stay with me please."
"No, Sakura don't worry I will. Please talk. I want to hear your voice before I drift away."
Sakura took all the strength she had left from holding her tears back and slowly began to sing.
"Rock a bye baby on the tree top, when the wind blows the cradle will rock. When the bough breaks, the will and down will come baby cradle and all..."
Kakashi was left with one sense. He couldn't feel Sakura near him singing, he could taste the blood in his mouth, and he couldn't smell Sakura, nor could he say the sky which he use to stare up at night. But he thanked god that at least he could hear Sakura sing.
He closed his eyes that saw nothing and drifted away as Sakura finished the song that he heard as a child. Sakura held him tighter and tighter as he drifted. She was later forced to let go of him when Sakurie came back to take her to jail.




P.S. Don't cry. I have tricks up my sleeve wink
 

Hiyukura


Hiyukura

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:33 pm
Part 8
The Beggining of the End

Sakura was put in her jail cell for a week, then taken out from there for an interrogation."What are you going to do to me???"Sakura yelled as she was taken to her jail cell."What is there left to do?"said Sakurie. "The one you love is dead and Sasuke knows you really don't like him."
"Neither do you."
"True. He is a tool I used to get to be where I am. Head of the Akatsuki, the army of two hidden villages , mine, and Kakashi the shadow clone ninja dead."
"You had no right to say Kakashi's name in vain, " said Sasuke, who was listening to the whole conversation.
"Sakurie, I really never liked you anyways, you were a tool to getting rid of the Akatsuki and a pathetic person, you."
Sakurie didn't mind using Sasuke at all, but did mine him using her. Sakurie with rage went to hit Sasuke, but he easily blocked it and knocked her to the ground.
"Come on, we have little time," said Sasuke as he looked slowly at Sakura.
He led her outside where they saw Gaara, his wife, Naruto, Hinata, and his army heading towards them, fighting the guardsmen off as then came.
"Get away from her," yelled Gaara as he took a big kantana out from his side.
"Gaara it's ok, he's helping me escape," she declared.
"I wouldn't trust him. Where's Kakashi?" questioned Gaara.
"Sakurie killed him. You are standing where he died a week ago." Sakura dropped to her knees and began to cry. Sasuke didn't get why she would cry over there sensei which was a teacher, nothing more at all. He also didn't know that she didn't love him at all, but she loved Kakashi. The representatives came close to her and tried to get her calmed down but she wouldn't. She was a machine that never stopped, never. Everyone tried to get her up, but it didn't work. Sasuke ended up carrying her to the Hidden village of the sand. She was either silent or crying for the rest of the week until they came to the sand village at last.

"Sakurie stop until we are all defeated," Gaara said at a meeting when they got home to the sparring room."Has all of you gotten your villages to help?"
"Yes," everyone replied.
"I know that we all mourn about Kakashi's death but we have to fight tomorrow."


P.S. It is not the End biggrin
 
PostPosted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:12 pm
Writing Time!

Time to write about what you think about it.
The Writing time starts right now and ends at the 16th of June!
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Will continue soon!  

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