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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:00 am
All for you my love
Well I've walked a million miles, to find you I've climbed the mountains to see you
I've searched the seas to catch you I've ran the sands of time to hear you
To find out just who you are, who you are I've been traveling along time, way to far
To turn back now, I've gotten so close to you I've gotten so close, I just gotta love you
Love you to death and everything in between Our love is like none other they've seen
We will withstand all in gods hands to be one We will survive all of the deeds that has come
I will do all that I can for you my sweet gal I'll take the head of your ex with a 50. cal.
If thats what it takes to keep you alive I'd do it, I'd have to, I need to strive
Let us be, let us go, let us show our love Our love that has been a gift from above
That has last us a lifetime of sarrow to overcome Together we share our pasts, no more are we numb
We share our lives now intertwined by fate Our destiny will not be the one to come late
So we live now, we live the here and now We're together forever, and it's just as how
I said, I promised it'd be, it is the way it is Now we live this life the way we do in bliss
Now I have to end it here, something we all will miss Kind of like the soft sweet sensation of our loves kiss
Well this is one of my newest poems so far. This one is dedicated to my beloved, Trista. Please do let me know how you all like it or dislike it. Thank you. Heaven is love. Peace.
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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:56 pm
I like it! There is alot of love in this poem. I also like the way you put in mountains and seas to give it a higher meaning. I like the poem but i don't like the title, it sounds very common and the poem is not. Hmm but I don't know a better title eather.
Goos work and keep on writing
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:53 pm
That's Pretty Good 3nodding I like how you were able to make it rhythm, that's pretty hard for some to do Keep it up
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