The Tangle

[pishya]

The Tangle

Chris Wooton©

He walks no trodden path

No marked pavement road

He has no fear of wrath

No question of power bestowed

He is running through the Tangle

Through the trees and weeds

Trying to differenciate

The good and evil deeds

He hears voices three

Through the trees

He follows one

Down to his knees

And on the way

He hears it say

"Do not listen

To you today."

He is running through the Tangle

Through the thorns and brush

He listens harder

As one begins to hush

Now voices two

Quoth the second;

"I follow you."

And he loses way

Into the fray

He listens deeper

As one gets weaker

Now voices one

And he is stunned

Quoth the third;

"You are running through the Tangle

Through the thorns and vines

If you stop the strangle

I'll make it cheese and wine."

For those of you wondering: yes, I am Christopher Wooton.  

[Akane Asokura]

That was really good I loved it hope to read more from you ^^  

[a very small bird]

Wow, that was awesome! That was...confusing at first, but then I started to get it. :] lolz!  

[Im Gone I Lost]

Indigo Myth

The Tangle

Chris Wooton©

He walks no trodden path

No marked pavement road

He has no fear of wrath

No question of power bestowed

He is running through the Tangle

Through the trees and weeds

Trying to differenciate

The good and evil deeds

He hears voices three

Through the trees

He follows one

Down to his knees

And on the way

He hears it say

"Do not listen

To you today."

He is running through the Tangle

Through the thorns and brush

He listens harder

As one begins to hush

Now voices two

Quoth the second;

"I follow you."

And he loses way

Into the fray

He listens deeper

As one gets weaker

Now voices one

And he is stunned

Quoth the third;

"You are running through the Tangle

Through the thorns and vines

If you stop the strangle

I'll make it cheese and wine."

For those of you wondering: yes, I am Christopher Wooton.

Not saying I don't like it, but I hate Monorhyming/Ryhming couplet type poems, it just seems elementary to me.

I like the idea though not bad  

[BlueStockingRabbit]

its good did you just randomly write this, or did it come from something? well whatever it came from you did an awsome job  

[Victor Black256]

Nostalgic Melody

Indigo Myth

The Tangle

Chris Wooton©

He walks no trodden path

No marked pavement road

He has no fear of wrath

No question of power bestowed

He is running through the Tangle

Through the trees and weeds

Trying to differenciate

The good and evil deeds

He hears voices three

Through the trees

He follows one

Down to his knees

And on the way

He hears it say

"Do not listen

To you today."

He is running through the Tangle

Through the thorns and brush

He listens harder

As one begins to hush

Now voices two

Quoth the second;

"I follow you."

And he loses way

Into the fray

He listens deeper

As one gets weaker

Now voices one

And he is stunned

Quoth the third;

"You are running through the Tangle

Through the thorns and vines

If you stop the strangle

I'll make it cheese and wine."

For those of you wondering: yes, I am Christopher Wooton.

Not saying I don't like it, but I hate Monorhyming/Ryhming couplet type poems, it just seems elementary to me.

I like the idea though not bad

actually it is not elementary at all. in fact it is a true form of poetry, though it may seem "elementary". that is because it is a common form of poetry. very confusing though, the poem is.  

[pishya]

Quite. It pertains to anyone, actually. The tangle resembles literally a brush forest, which normally is really hard to walk through. The metaphorical meaning is that the forest resembles one's journey through life. Though long and arduous, it is rewarding at the end.