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The Darkest Lane

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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:41 pm

This one of the newest I've written:

I know the darkest lane
Everything you thought was me
The echoes in the grave
There is nothing left to save
I am the darkness bane
My heart is finally free
The truth is behind your eyes
Why do you tell these lies?

The problem is easy, there is always a solution
Everybody wana run
I stay, yet I am undone
Then, the rich think of an evil conclusion.

I know the darkest lane
The voices get loud
They drive me insane
In my mind, there is a cloud.

I know the darkest lane

Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:54 pm

I really like this one ^^ Great rhyming scheme. So what made you write it?

You should post more!! heart

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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:03 pm

I'm on my Wii, so I can't post the poems I've written as much as I want to or invite people to the guild. I just check the crew activity, and answer messages.

What made me write it was basically my current house problems, what always happens to me sooner or later, which is that everyone says they're going to help and they just run, and someone who died.

Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:22 pm

Well if you ever need anyone to talk to...I am here...I never run ^^

I have many friends that are willing to vouch for that 3nodding
So don't be afraid to talk to me, when you need or want k?

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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:40 pm

Thanks. =D

Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:19 pm

i like it alot.
its really good

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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:51 pm

you two Ambrosia and uh... Hazel, your friendness makes me happy.
and happiness is good. and it's good that people are geting along. there's too much hate. and that was a good poem. these are very good poems.
you guys are good poets. good job. gold star. * yaaay :3