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 Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:02 am
i love making rps with unique elements and not to follow the same path everyone else dose when making there rps
so im going to make one for this guild called The Animal Mother...something that was model off of The Demon Mother i made that one as well...somethings were flawed about that one but was still fun to play
Anyyyways! i would love to get some of your input on the plot of it!
Once there lived a family that hated every human that lived in the city that was corrupted by greed and lust and destroy the frosts of witch this family so they set out to have them embarrass the forest bu treunig them into ainmales and having them live in there forest that they garund fearlessly against the humans that want to destroy the trees. As there family aged as they got ready with spells that they created the family grwen to old for them to take on there plan so the parents and elders passed the plans down to the only child they hade because they were so busy they did not have time to raise the child properly so she when she had learned of the plans that her parents have gave her she made some changes in the plans starting with turning the rest of the family into Animals for revenge on her parents for not raising her as they should have and changing the plans so that she tagred kids that entered the forest of the family that has many times tryed to be logged but was always the loggers would be gone by the time that would be back form work...no wounder were they when...so now the girl is now know as mother in a romer told to kids so they wont go wondering into the forest and get lost or get hurt but they did not know that there was a mother in there that turned the kids that come into the forest and take care of them giving her the name...The Animal Mother
what do you think of it? please post your opinion so i mite make it better!
((don't be to harsh....pleseeeee....))
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 1:09 pm
Uhm.. Spell check's would be a nice start. rolleyes
Using an online dictionary to double check words you're unsure of and the like. If you download Google Chrome(Its a web browser) It will underline misspelled words and even give alternatives of what you might have been trying to write, much like windows word. And its just a whole lot better than internet explorer or safari. >_>
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:16 pm
i do use it! i have Google chrome and i have disgraveah (misspelled there) its like dyslexics but its with your hands, hand writing and spelling so no much i can do about that
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