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 Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:53 am
People fall people rise,
take a wrong turn and get a suprise,
lose all your cash,
the IRS will make you dash,
politics are everywhere,
world is ending and nearly no one cares,
all the hurricanes, earthquakes, and tsunamies,
Im suprised they dont blame the commies,
oil's low,
economies slow,
what do people not know,
where this world is going to go,
For the love of god people listen,
oil will never resupply and glisten,
Im sorry to be shrewed,
but we're all screwed rofl rofl rofl
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Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 4:07 pm
Blank_Grey_Haze People fall people rise, take a wrong turn and get a suprise, lose all your cash, the IRS will make you dash, politics are everywhere, world is ending and nearly no one cares, all the hurricanes, earthquakes, and tsunamies, Im suprised they dont blame the commies, oil's low, economies slow, what do people not know, where this world is going to go, For the love of god people listen, oil will never resupply and glisten, Im sorry to be shrewed, but we're all screwed rofl rofl rofl Ah, true it is. There are regulare, high school kids who already have 'doomsday' theories. Ok, maybe not normal. One might have been, but most of them are just not entire weirdos, ya know? Smarter people usualy. I, personaly, believe we will blow ourselves up, and we'll be lucky if it doesn't happen within a decade. Ok, maybe I'm exagerating. But still. The world is, in fact, in the crapper. NOt to sound too negitive, but still.
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Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 4:13 pm
A truthful commentary on the state of the planet today, and if the ancient aztecs were correct we're officially going to blow ourselves up in december of the year 2012. However, your approach to the matter seemed less-than-serious (or so I derived) and with issues such as these where it's important to get people on your side, seriousness is crucial. It's also good to get folks' attentions with the occasional 'Shock And Awe Curse' (S.A.A.C.).
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:51 pm
Great point heart bad poem stare
Sorry dude. Maybe you should try grabbing peoples attention about climate change another way xp Suppose it makes a change from so many morbid poems though eek
Jaikai
xx
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:16 am
I liked the third and fourth lines.
It could have done without the emoticons.
All in all it was pretty good, especially if you where going for a poem that even a stupid noob could understand.
It even has a nice shape.
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