I love this, you describe the scene so well and the Imagery is amazing, I really relate to this poem because we had to climb a mountin for a hike i was on and i was thinking
one day this will all be aparments and house's, yes, so I really liked your poem and I do have a bit of advice it's just at the end when you say.....
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How this mountain might no longer have
a song.
I loved this line but I feel that you'd have been better off saying..
Quote:
How this mountain might no longer have
that song.
but that could just be me... 
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