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Lysine

PostPosted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 12:53 pm


Red winged blackbirds
Floating on the wings
Of a ghost, of a lemur
Riding on the light of a silver spirit
Light in the heart and floating in the wings
Reading the storys in the clouds.
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It took me about 2-3-7 minutes to write.
. mrgreen .
PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:51 pm


Greedy?
Really!
End
Eris,
Die.
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I wrote that in one minute.
.
mrgreen .

Lysine


Lysine

PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:52 pm


Winter
In
Night,
Good
Silver.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 5:53 pm


We
End
Death,
Death
In
Numbers
Gone.

Lysine


Lysine

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 7:15 pm


With
Hollered
Yearnings.
?
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